THE Aleuts had drop the bales of otter. They drew knives from their belts and as our warriors rushed upon them the two lines surged back and forth along the beach.Men fell to the sand and rose to fight again.Others fell and did not get up. my father was one of these.
I find this paragraph interesting as there is a lot of action and suspense. What do the rest of you think?
Wednesday, June 27, 2007
Plot Analyser(Muhd Faiz 1B)
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yup! this iS very interesting ...
I think you took the correct plot as I thinkc this plot is interesting
Very interesting plot. I love reading this.Do write more. There is a lot of action and suspense.
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