The tide was low and the rocks and the narrow beach were scaterred with bundles of otter pelts . Half of the hunters were on the ship .The rest were wading into the water , tossing the pelts into a boat . The aleuts laughed while they worked , as if they were happy to leave the island
Wednesday, June 27, 2007
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you should discribe more about the scenery or discribtion.
Can I know what would you like us to talk about for this specific scene?
describe more about the scenery.
i agree with farah and noorun.you did not provide us with enough and detailed scenery and information.we really need you to improve on your description.please put in more information so that it can be easily understood.
You need to describe more
I do not understand the purpose of your entry. Furthermore, it looks incomplete.
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