Island Of The Blue Dolphins
Passage Master
- Captain Orlov raised the lids and pulled out several necklaces. There was a little light in the sky, yet the beads sparkled as he turned this way and that. Beside me, Ulape drew in her breath of excitement, and i could hear cries of delight from the women hidden in the brush. Here we can tell that there are excitement going on !
- The tide was low and the rocks and the narrow beach were scattered with bundles of otter pelts. Half of the hunters were on the ship. The rest were wadding into the water, tossing the pelts into a boat. The Aluets laughed while they worked, as if they were happy to leave the island.
- With their spears raised our men rushed down across the ledge. A puff of white smoke came from the deck of the ship. A loud noise echoed against the cliff. Five of our warriors fell and lay out.
Tuesday, June 26, 2007
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There are more than two passage that are good and you should add in.
you should not use the word 'me' because you are not in the story.
What did you mean by "Here we can tell that there are excitement going on !"Is it in the storybook? Or you add it?
What make the loud noise echoed against the cliff? Can you elaborate?
i copied the sentence from the passage and the word 'me' is stated in the passage.
"here we can tell that there are excitement going on!" this sentence is i added in .
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