Monday, July 2, 2007

Island of the blue dolphins-Syahiirah

chapter 4(group 3)

4 comments:

Ms Dawn Chia said...

Is it appropriate to use 'pity dad' in this context? Is that all you feel about your Dad's death? What exactly does 'pity' mean? When should we use it?

nuhaaa .. said...

Since you are the character analyser, you should explain more about how they feel.For example, the toondoo that you have done,you should put in the expressions in their faces...

ATIKA said...

Put some sentences in the pictures , relating to the scene . Examples , for what he is paying for in the first place ? why . and like what nuha said , put some expressions in their faces , like angry , sad or happy faces .

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